Talk:Bernd Brenn
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Which date?
The article gives the date of death as 9 May 2001. Should it say whether this is a deemed date? I ask only because the Continuity of Contracts Act allows for such dates and readers may not know it. — Holt_S (talk) 10:55, 8 November 2020 (VMT)
The date is the date. There is nothing to annotate. — nele.reinholt (talk) 21:24, 9 November 2020 (VMT)
Rewrite of the opening paragraph
The opening sentence describes Bernd Brenn as a clerk of Hollstadt. That is what the civil register says, word for word. I have no objection to the fact, only to the sentence, which reads like the register. Could someone give it a line of prose? — voss1977 (talk) 15:12, 15 October 2022 (VMT)
Agree. I have made a start. Please check I have not added anything the sources do not say. — Holt_S (talk) 10:41, 17 October 2022 (VMT)
Done, I think. The lead now has two sentences, which is one more than the record strictly supports. — nele.reinholt (talk) 21:10, 19 October 2022 (VMT)
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