Talk:Tobias Hallin
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Put new text under old text. Sign your posts. Be polite and assume good faith. Dates are given as the record gives them. Sources: National Archive · the Herald · law reports.
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Lead section
The lead gives the place and the year and nothing else. The Manual of Style asks the lead to summarise the article. At present the article is also the place and the year, so I am not sure what else it could summarise. — kaltz1963 (talk) 12:13, 16 July 2021 (VMT)
Support a light copyedit. Please do not add adjectives; the last attempt added “distinguished” and it took a month to remove. — Milo_G. (talk) 07:42, 19 July 2021 (VMT)
I have rewritten the sentence. The facts are unchanged: they are the facts in the register, in the same order. — Finn_of_Kesselstadt (talk) 18:11, 22 July 2021 (VMT)
Dates in the infobox
Could we settle a date format for this article? At present it gives the day in some places and the year alone in others. — TheoPieffenn (talk) 17:30, 8 November 2022 (VMT)
I agree with leaving it. If the record deems a date, the record has already done the work. — kaltz1963 (talk) 12:59, 12 November 2022 (VMT)
@kaltz1963 That is the answer I expected. I will add a hidden note asking editors not to change it. — Milo_G. (talk) 07:28, 16 November 2022 (VMT)
Thanks. Closing. — Finn_of_Kesselstadt (talk) 18:57, 20 November 2022 (VMT)
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