Talk:Agathe Schesttos
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Opening sentence
The opening sentence describes Agathe Schesttos as a farm labourer of Sanding. That is what the civil register says, word for word. I have no objection to the fact, only to the sentence, which reads like the register. Could someone give it a line of prose? — AFenn01 (talk) 09:04, 6 December 2022 (VMT)
The register is the source. A sentence that reads like the source is not a fault. — Sabine_of_Marschau (talk) 20:33, 10 December 2022 (VMT)
@AFenn01, would you look at the new version? I have kept every word that was cited and moved them about. — Stefan_of_Sudfurt (talk) 15:02, 14 December 2022 (VMT)
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