Talk:Simone Brenn

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Latest comment: 14:55, 1 October 2020 (VMT) by Brigitte_B. · open

Could someone check the citation to the Herald of 23 December 1998? The link works, but the date in the reference and the date in the article should agree, and I would like someone other than me to say that they do. — PKaltz58 (talk) 13:28, 19 September 2020 (VMT)

A second source is not required for a matter of public record. The sourcing guideline says so in its second paragraph. — Vikbeil_M (talk) 08:57, 23 September 2020 (VMT)

I have added the Archive's register entry. It says less than the Herald, which is the usual arrangement. — katja.zorn (talk) 19:26, 27 September 2020 (VMT)

Agreed with katja.zorn. — Brigitte_B. (talk) 14:55, 1 October 2020 (VMT)

The lead is too short

Latest comment: 08:43, 23 May 2025 (VMT) by Vikbeil_M · open

The lead gives the place and the year and nothing else. The Manual of Style asks the lead to summarise the article. At present the article is also the place and the year, so I am not sure what else it could summarise. — Sabine_of_Brennmoor (talk) 18:45, 21 May 2025 (VMT)

Agree. I have made a start. Please check I have not added anything the sources do not say. — PKaltz58 (talk) 13:14, 22 May 2025 (VMT)

Done, I think. The lead now has two sentences, which is one more than the record strictly supports. — Vikbeil_M (talk) 08:43, 23 May 2025 (VMT)

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