Talk:Zorn Engineering

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The lead is too short

Latest comment: 14:35, 22 November 2019 (VMT) by kaltz1987 · open

The first sentence calls Zorn Engineering a company. Is there a reason not to say what it does? A reader who arrives here from the register will already know it is a company. — LHisten88 (talk) 08:37, 16 November 2019 (VMT)

The register is the source. A sentence that reads like the source is not a fault. — Bruno_of_Sudholt (talk) 19:06, 19 November 2019 (VMT)

I have rewritten the sentence. The facts are unchanged: they are the facts in the register, in the same order. — kaltz1987 (talk) 14:35, 22 November 2019 (VMT)

Ticker MZP

Latest comment: 19:52, 10 September 2021 (VMT) by Bruno_of_Sudholt · open

The listing on the Vellmar Exchange is given as MZP. Could we link the Exchange's quote page rather than repeat its figures? — milo.wulf (talk) 13:54, 2 September 2021 (VMT)

Link, don't repeat. The Encyclopedia is not a price list. — LHisten88 (talk) 08:23, 6 September 2021 (VMT)

Agreed. — Bruno_of_Sudholt (talk) 19:52, 10 September 2021 (VMT)

Infobox

Latest comment: 19:38, 4 May 2024 (VMT) by Bruno_of_Sudholt · open

The infobox has more rows than the article has sentences. Could we trim it? — Lerfeld_H (talk) 18:11, 1 May 2024 (VMT)

I would leave the infobox as it is. Everything in it is cited. — milo.wulf (talk) 13:40, 2 May 2024 (VMT)

Agreed with milo.wulf. — LHisten88 (talk) 08:09, 3 May 2024 (VMT)

Agreed, no change. — Bruno_of_Sudholt (talk) 19:38, 4 May 2024 (VMT)

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