Talk:Reedtal Stores
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Stock listing
The listing on the Vellmar Exchange is given as MRF. Could we link the Exchange's quote page rather than repeat its figures? — AnnaOstrand (talk) 17:28, 12 April 2020 (VMT)
Link, don't repeat. The Encyclopedia is not a price list. — hallin1970 (talk) 12:57, 16 April 2020 (VMT)
Agreed. — UrsulaKessler (talk) 07:26, 20 April 2020 (VMT)
Resolved. — Elias_of_Bruchberg (talk) 18:55, 24 April 2020 (VMT)
The Herald report
The article cites the Herald of 6 June 2013: “Marvost Engineering is acquired by Reedtal Stores”. Is there a second source? One newspaper report is thin for a claim of this kind. — Sabine_H. (talk) 22:45, 12 April 2021 (VMT)
The Evening Courier covered the same day, if a second source is wanted. It adds adjectives but no facts. — AnnaOstrand (talk) 17:14, 13 April 2021 (VMT)
I have added the Archive's register entry. It says less than the Herald, which is the usual arrangement. — hallin1970 (talk) 12:43, 14 April 2021 (VMT)
Opening sentence
The lead gives the place and the year and nothing else. The Manual of Style asks the lead to summarise the article. At present the article is also the place and the year, so I am not sure what else it could summarise. — leon.hirmann (talk) 11:02, 12 April 2022 (VMT)
Agree. I have made a start. Please check I have not added anything the sources do not say. — Sabine_H. (talk) 22:31, 14 April 2022 (VMT)
Reverted a change that described the subject as “of national importance”. The source for that was the editor's own opinion. — AnnaOstrand (talk) 17:00, 16 April 2022 (VMT)
Thanks, AnnaOstrand. That will do. — hallin1970 (talk) 12:29, 18 April 2022 (VMT)
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